In this excerpt from Deadly Dreams by Victor J Banis - #3 in the Deadly Mysteries series - Stanley’s sociopathic brother, Andrew, has Stanley and Tom come to rescue him. A painful past. A mysterious stranger. Footsteps vanishing in the fog. All Stanley wants is just to hear Tom say, "I love you." All Tom wants is Stanley safe. And the stranger? Ah, there's the rub--what exactly is it that he wants?
Be careful what you wish for, fellows. You may get it. Dreams can be deadly.
Deadly Dreams
MLR Press (April 24, 2009)
ISBN: 1608200388
Excerpt:
Andrew was saved
from answering. Stanley's voice came weakly from beyond the screen in the
corner: "Tom? Is that you?"
* * *
Stanley was
dreaming. He was in some plague-infected city, London, perhaps, or maybe only a
city of dreams. He heard the rumble of the death carts, the voice calling,
"Bring out your dead…"
Then, suddenly,
another voice superimposed itself, a voice that brought him back in an instant
from the swirling, smothering darkness of his nightmares.
He opened his
eyes, blinked. "Tom," he called, "is that you?"
* * *
Tom turned
automatically, took a step in that direction—which saved his life, at least for
the moment. Andrew fired his gun just as Tom turned. Andrew was a fairly good
shot; if Stanley hadn't spoken, if Tom hadn't moved, Andrew would certainly
have killed him with that one shot. Instead of the chest, right in the heart,
the bullet caught Tom lower, off center. Tom staggered and fell, pain piercing
his side where the bullet had entered. But not dead.
Andrew struck all
of the matches in his hand and threw them at the trail of gasoline on the
floor. He would have shot Tom again, intended to shoot him with a more careful
aim, but the flames surprised him, leaped up faster, more violently than he had
expected. The heat was instantly intense, growing rapidly worse and still
worse. It felt as if any second his clothes might ignite spontaneously, or his
hair, even.
He hesitated for
only a heartbeat. Tom was wounded, perhaps mortally. In any case, it would take
no more than a minute at the most for the gasoline to reach the pile of propane
canisters, seconds more for the tanks to explode. Wounded, there was no way Tom
would escape in time.
A living dog is
better than a dead lion. The instinct for self-survival that had served Andrew
so well in the past came to the fore. He fired one more shot, wildly, and made
his own escape while he still could, bolting upward, the metal stairs clanging
as he ran.
Already, the metal
was hot to the touch. He ran harder.
* * *
Tom staggered to
his knees. The fire was spreading rapidly, the flames racing across the open
space. When it got to the propane tanks…
"Stanley,"
he shouted. High above, a door opened and banged shut. Smoke blew into Tom's
face, making him cough. He made it to his feet, clutching at his side. Blood
seeped through his fingers. He held his hand tight over the wound and lumbered
toward the wooden screen. Banged into it, knocking it over with a crash.
Stanley was
sitting on the edge of a cot, shaking his head groggily. "Tom," he
said. "I heard a shot. I…"
"Get
up," Tom ordered him, "we've got to get out of here."
Stanley's eyes
went wide, tried to focus. "You're hurt."
"Just a
scratch. Come on." He got Stanley to his feet, his arm around him.
"No, save your breath, we'll talk later." Staggering feebly, Tom
managed to get with him to the main part of the warehouse. Already, the room
was an inferno, the flames lapping at the tanks of propane. Tom's gut was on
fire, the smoke stinging his eyes and his lungs. His knees felt like jelly.
Behind them, the wooden partition burst into flames with a small explosion,
like a popgun going off. Tom could see the open door—a thousand miles away.
He suddenly knew
he wouldn't make it. He could only hold Stanley back—and if he did, neither of
them was going to escape.
"Run,
Stanley," he said, shoving a hand hard at Stanley's back. "The door.
Go, fast as you can. Don't worry, I’m right behind you."
For a second,
Stanley hesitated. "Go," Tom bellowed, shoving harder, "God damn
it, Stanley, do what I tell you. Run."
Stanley ran. The
flames were a flickering curtain. He could see Tom's pick up through them, and
the open door beyond that. He put his arms up over his face and ran through the
blaze, past the truck, out the door…and found himself, astonishingly, in Edward
Hannibal's arms.
"Easy,"
Hannibal said, brushing at the smoldering sleeve of Stanley's jacket,
"We've got you. Take it easy."
Stanley's laugh
was just short of hysterical. "My God," he said, "Did you ever
see…Tom, look, it's Mister Hannibal, talk about Johnny-on-the-spot. Whoo-eee,
talk about…"
He looked over his
shoulder. Cars were parked everywhere, police cars and dark government sedans,
and already in the distance he could hear sirens. People were milling about; it
looked like an army of them, men in dark suits and men in black SFPD uniforms.
Only…he didn't see
Tom among them.
The warehouse
exploded suddenly, a blast so violent that it shook the ground like an
earthquake. Great tongues of flame burst out the door and flung the glass from
the windows, scorching the sparse grass that ran along the side of the alley,
driving the people closest to it back, to take shelter behind the vehicles.
"Where's
Tom?" Stanley demanded, of no one and everyone, his voice ascending.
"Tom? Where are you?"
"Take it
easy," Hannibal said again.
Stanley looked
into his face, back at the fire now leaping skyward, and into Hannibal's face
again. "He didn't make it?" Hannibal said nothing. He didn't need to.
His expression said everything.
"Let me
go." Stanley struggled with the arms that were suddenly tighter around
him. "Tom's still in there. Damn you, let me go."
"Hold
him," Hannibal said, and all at once there were more arms, it seemed
dozens of them, holding Stanley back when he would have rushed into that conflagration.
Would have rushed into Hell itself if Tom were there. Didn't they know that?
Couldn't they understand?
Stanley fought
against them furiously, cursing and kicking and punching, but there were too
many of them and they were too strong. His strength failed him then, and he
surrendered to the arms, felt someone lifting him off the ground, carrying him
away from the fire.
"Tom."
It was a scream of pain, of anguish. "Tom!"
For other excerpts from this series:
Deadly Nightshade - 4/20/09
Deadly Wrong- 3/1609
Deadly Slumber - 8/1/11, 10/7/13
Deadly Kind of Love -5/30/11
Deadly Silence - 12/10
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3 comments:
A great piece of writing, which I always try to mimic, but sadly rarely ever do. You have to have a writer's gift, which Victor has been blessed with, and I consider myself lucky to at least be able to read him. Victor is a writer I emulate. He's like the Hemingway of his craft; the man is a gem.
Lovely. I read this book years ago, and really enjoyed the story and characters. Bravo.
This is exactly the scene I remember most clearly from my first reading (like Alan, some time ago). The scene is built so well and the suspense so organic to the characters and their story that I get goosebumps again, even though I know now what happens next. Masterful!
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