The
novella “An Island Interlude” by Anel Viz appears in the
December, 2012 issue of Wilde Oats online magazine and will run until the next
issue comes out in April. “An Island
Interlude” is in three parts – Barcarole, Romanza, and Fugue – each divided
into three short chapters. This excerpt is
the opening chapter, called “The Shoal.”
Commenting on Wilde Oats, Anel Viz says, "I always
submit stories to Wilde Oats, and for many good reasons: 1) Loyalty. I got my start there. The person
responsible for my first publication by inviting me to submit something for a
vampire anthology he was editing is one of the founders of the zine and asked
me for a story to help launch it. (A revised version of that vampire story is
now available in my Dark Horror anthology.)
2) The zine publishes gay-themed stories in all genres, so it's good for
placing my stories that aren't traditional romances (or aren't romances at
all). 3) My editor at Wilde Oats does a
terrific job, and we have a wonderful working relationship. 4) Since I don't have an active blog or
website, it's the perfect place to put my freebie offerings. 5) They haven't yet turned down anything I've
submitted. What's not to like?"
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An Island Interlude
Wilde Oats (December, 2012)
Excerpt:
I tried to distract myself with work, but
the bitter cold at last determined me to take a much needed and long overdue
vacation, so I rushed through my end of term corrections to be able to spend
the last two weeks of January in the sunshine of the Caribbean .
For the first three days, I luxuriated in
doing nothing and let my mind go blank.
I didn’t even explore the small town in which my beachfront hotel was
located. I lay on the sand far from the
water line, seldom venturing into the ocean, staying under the trees so as not
to burn. We’d had overcast skies since
early fall, and the northern winter had left me very pale. I spoke to no one. I read, I slept, returned to the hotel for my
meals, and went to bed early. I needed
time to myself, time to do nothing.
On my third morning there, I began to feel
restless. I rented some scuba equipment
and a boat and sailed out to a small island I had spotted on the horizon. I didn’t even ask its name. I went wearing only my swim trunks, a
tee-shirt and a small hat with a visor, and took only a large beach towel, my
book, sunscreen, a few pieces of fruit and two liter bottles of water. It was no doubt rash of me to dive alone, but
I meant to hug the shoreline and figured the risk would not be much. The seabed there is sandy and not very deep.
It did not take long to sail there, no more
than twenty minutes, even in what was really not much more than a motorized
rowboat. It reminded me how many little
islands there were in addition to the bigger ones. I had let it slip my mind although I’d seen
them from the plane.
I rounded the island, apparently
uninhabited, and anchored in an empty cove that looked southwest over an
endless expanse of ocean under a cloudless sky.
It was as calm as a lagoon, and may have been one, though I passed no
reef on the side from which I entered it.
I took off my tee-shirt, checked my equipment one last time, sat
balanced on the side for a moment, and flipped backward into the calm,
shimmering water.
The flat, sandy bottom, no more than ten or
fifteen feet below the surface, was barren except for the occasional
conch. Jutting out, a rocky promontory
dense with vegetation formed the east end of the cove. If I were to find interesting underwater
formations and marine life anywhere on this island, it would be there, and
there I headed.
As I approached the promontory the sandy
bottom sloped more steeply toward the open water, and its foot was indeed
cluttered with rock crusted over with the shells of tiny mollusks, and plenty
of crevices to shelter the more timid creatures and hide their lurking
predators. The land on the far side fell
straight into the sea, and beyond it the ocean floor plunged sharply down some
sixty feet or more, where a few hundred yards ahead of me a dense shoal of
silver fish hovered in an immense wall between the bottom sand and the rippling
surface. I swam cautiously to within a
few feet of it so as not to disturb the fish in their dance, and held there
treading water at a depth of about forty feet.
The school suddenly became agitated and
their motions erratic. Had they sensed a
shark? The wall divided in front of me
and vanished in either direction, and I found myself face to face with another
diver, a young man who had been watching them from the other side, treading
water like myself and wearing nothing but his diving mask. His dive must have frightened them off. He could not have been there long without
air.
We were maybe six or eight yards apart. He was beautiful. Lean and muscular, his long, black hair
adrift in the current, his sex wagging handsomely with the in-and-out movements
of his arms and legs. The evenness of
his tan showed that he was in the habit of diving nude, but he evidently had
not expected to encounter another human being in that isolated spot, for he
cast me what looked like a sheepish grin from behind his mask.
He pointed to the surface. I looked up and saw the white hull of a boat,
at least ten times larger than mine.
Then he jerked his head upward with a slight shrug of his
shoulders. An invitation? I nodded, and he headed toward the surface
just as the scattered shoal swirled back into place and reformed between us,
closed like a gleaming silver curtain, and blocked him from my view.
I had, as I’ve said, spoken to no one except
the hotel clerk, a couple of waiters and the owner of the boat rental since I
got there. I felt more isolated suddenly
cut off from him than I had sitting in my boat looking out over the ocean or
swimming through the empty water along the sandy bottom of the cove, and for
the first time since my arrival I felt the need for human conversation. I started back up wondering what was in store
for me. A cocktail, a cup of
coffee? Had he come there alone or was
his girlfriend also on board? I imagined
he would have slipped into a swimsuit by the time I got there. I didn’t even know what language he spoke.
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(When reading An Island Interlude on Wilde Oats, be sure to click on "continue" for the entire story; there's also a review of of Horror, Dark & Lite by Anel Viz in the issue)
6 comments:
Just the imagery of what could be occurring has the stiffness budding in me... Have to read the whole thing.
Anel's usually lovely (and elegant) prose, sweeps you into the story. Of course, a naked diver helps. Note, fellow writers, with what economy of detail he manages to make that other diver real to you, so that you see him in your mind - with scarcely a word of description. That's good work.
I have to say Victor is right. A lovely excerpt, especially on this cold day.
Joe DeMarco
Very nice, poetic, and well-written, Anel. Thanks for sharing. Jon
Elegant writing, Anel. You made me feel his isolation, and his loneliness. Well done.
Lovely imagery. I could see everything...and what visions!
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